Wednesday, July 25, 2007

um..ok..

We both fall into this trap.

um...ok...

Something (unexpected...unpleasant...)
happens
and rather than deal with it head-on

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And then one of us prattles on explaining,
while the other sits in silence.

um...ok...

(For other offerings, check out this weeks posts at Poetry Thursday.)

5 comments:

paris parfait said...

Sounds like a relationship desperately in need of communication skills!

paisley said...

dearest,, my two sweet hounds are better conversationalists... lol... this is very cute,, and unfortunately accurate of some of the conversations i am privy to over hear.....

Anonymous said...

um..ok...I like this!

Clare said...

Ah, yes, I've experienced this type of interaction before! I really like how you wrote this -- it's terrific.

Tumblewords: said...

You nailed this one, for sure!